Martes, Disyembre 6, 2011

Reviews on Spider's Thread

This story thought me that even to the slightest good deeds we make it creates a big difference, and that everyone deserves a second chance no matter he had before there will always be that small goodness inculcated in his heart, and that selfishness and pride will not get you to anything instead it will just drag you down.


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  1. Madilyn CaresusaDisyembre 13, 2011 nang 2:01 AM

    Hi. I get your point but most of the sentences are run-on. Employ proper punctuation so as not to make a very long sentence that almost looks like a paragraph. Kindly improve it.

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